on a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item.fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. write a letter to the manager of your insurance company.in your letter describe the item you lost explain how you lost it tell the in

Essay topics:

on a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item.fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. write a letter to the manager of your insurance company.

in your letter
describe the item you lost
explain how you lost it
tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

dear sir,
I am writing this letter to you regarding to get insurance which I have lost my laptop during last week holiday trip.

To begin with, last week we went to Goa holiday trip which held on 24th August and we stayed on luxuries hotel then next day we went to beach and we have utilized beat to see nearest Island. Unfortunately I was carrying my laptop and I was sitting on the corner suddenly huge waves came and I lost my balance so my laptop felt down on the sea that one middle of the sea nobody expected this sudden issue happened.Luckily I have covered insurance for holiday trip and which one include for all the valuable items anything lost.

I would like to apply insurance to recover my valuable item and please let me know what procedure I need to follow to get on the same.Also, please guide me to do step by step process to complete this.

I am looking forward your reply.

yours sincerly,
john.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Dear
dear sir, I am writing this letter to you ...
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Line 4, column 97, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'luxuries'' or 'luxury's'?
Suggestion: luxuries'; luxury's
...ch held on 24th August and we stayed on luxuries hotel then next day we went to beach an...
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Line 4, column 172, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'see the nearest'.
Suggestion: see the nearest
...t to beach and we have utilized beat to see nearest Island. Unfortunately I was carrying my...
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Line 4, column 414, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Luckily
...ody expected this sudden issue happened.Luckily I have covered insurance for holiday tr...
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Line 4, column 507, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'items'' or 'item's'?
Suggestion: items'; item's
... which one include for all the valuable items anything lost. I would like to apply...
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Line 6, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...ure I need to follow to get on the same.Also, please guide me to do step by step pro...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
... I am looking forward your reply. yours sincerly, john.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, regarding, so, then, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47647058824 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40234170649 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.287257191 44.8134815571 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 126.833333333 76.5299724578 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 16.8248392259 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 4.34317383033 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238209180759 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109084411164 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876478335005 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136787786797 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0990726538478 0.0580467560999 171% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 8.37731958763 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 7.45979381443 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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