You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.Write a letter to former teacher.In your lettergive details of the jobexplain why it is important to yousuggest what information your could put in the reference.

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You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.Write a letter to former teacher.
In your letter
give details of the job
explain why it is important to you
suggest what information your could put in the reference.

Dear Sir,

Hope things are doing well at your end.This is Nimish , one of your student from St. Xavier College, Delhi who completed his degree in the year 2010. You will be glad to hear that I have secured a job with Boston Consultancy group, Australia as a senior consultant for their banking division and the organization has asked for a reference letter from my previous teacher.

This opportunity will enhance my career prospects since I will be working with world's top 10 firms. As an advisor, my responsibilities will be to improvise banking business and suggest new products for retail and high networth clients of the banks.

The reference letter is a very important piece of the screening process in the company and human resource department has emphasized to furnish as soon as possible.
With your recommendation, my job with the firm will be secured. They need a list of subjects I studied during my graduation, also your phone number, email address if they require more information.

I hope you will be able to help me with the request and send me desired letter.

Yours sincerely,
Nimish

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
... Hope things are doing well at your end.This is Nimish , one of your student from St...
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Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...re doing well at your end.This is Nimish , one of your student from St. Xavier Col...
^^
Line 8, column 125, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...subjects I studied during my graduation, also your phone number, email address if...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95212765957 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78351134148 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675531914894 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.0944636351 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.444444444 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165896610521 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719114894759 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385268215298 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836514276955 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447335738163 0.0580467560999 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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