You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.
Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter,
give details of the job,
explain why it is important to you,
suggest that information your teacher could put in the reference.
Dear Mr. Singh,
Hope you are in the best of your health. I came to school last month in hope to meet you but unfortunately you were on leave that day. Sir i have a good news to share that I have received a job offer from IBM, one of the renowned company. I had been trying to get into this company since long. I shall be joining in IBM as a senior assistant in technical department from the 1st of the coming month.
I am extremely excited to join this prestigious offer. As you know I had been trying to work at this position since long, because I acquire the relevant knowledge and experience. And most importantly, as I am the sole member of my family who is earning, after the passing of my father. Hence, this opportunity with higher perks will definitely pay off in my career and life.
Sir I need a letter of reference from one of my former teachers and I could think of none but you for this. Kindly help me with this. You can write about my good behaviour and character, also mention about my academic achievements in your letter.
I will be very grateful to you for the help.
Your sincerely,
Aman virdi
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good news'.
Suggestion: good news
... you were on leave that day. Sir i have a good news to share that I have received a job off...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... from the 1st of the coming month. I am extremely excited to join this prest...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41706161137 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47323445296 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616113744076 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.051696125 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5714285714 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0714285714 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207585425684 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066127334175 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805699303796 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122686429876 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904417483392 0.0580467560999 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.