You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord.In your letter explain:Why you are writing to himWhy you cannot pay the rentWhen you will pay the rent

Essay topics:

You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord.
In your letter explain:
Why you are writing to him
Why you cannot pay the rent
When you will pay the rent

Dear Mr. Brown,

Hi! How are you? I hope everything is well. I am writing this letter to let you know that I will not be able to pay my rent for next month, January.
Due to unexpected circumstances, our company declared bankruptcy and all of us, employees are affected of this news. Because of what happened, our salary will be delayed and this is frustrating since I get all my expenses for my rent and to buy my personal necessities from my pay.
I feel ashamed that I will be skipping my rent for a month. However, I promise that this will be the first and last time that my payment will be late. Our human resource department assured us that by end of January. Cheques will be mailed to us and by the first week of February, I will hand you my payment personally.
I am hoping for your kind consideration to my favor. If it is a problem, please let me know immediately.

Sincerely yours,
Anna Ala

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...o pay my rent for next month, January. Due to unexpected circumstances, our com...
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... my personal necessities from my pay. I feel ashamed that I will be skipping m...
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...e skipping my rent for a month. However, I promise that this will be the first a...
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...owever, I promise that this will be the first and last time that my payment will...
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... will hand you my payment personally. I am hoping for your kind consideration ...
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...eration to my favor. If it is a problem, please let me know immediately. Sin...
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...oblem, please let me know immediately. Sincerely yours, Anna Ala
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... know immediately. Sincerely yours, Anna Ala
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, well, i feel, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37058823529 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66127554816 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594117647059 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7582975267 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.9166666667 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185658307665 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661872527784 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753964574406 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130593045901 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972217216419 0.0580467560999 167% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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