You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course.
Write a letter to the Head of Department to change your course. In your letter explain:
• what course are you doing now
• why you are not satisfied with that course
• what course would you like to change to
Dear Mr. Roy,
My name is johny and I am a student of arts branch in the batch of 2019-2022 in your college.I am writing this letter to request you to change my this course and allot me a other course.
I have chosen the psychology course for my bachelor's and I am in this from last one month and this is basically related to all humans emotions and behavioral study and it is full of theoretical. The course have 6 exams in a semeser and all are theory oriented and no practicals in first semester.
I am not happy with the course is because of faculty which are in psychology department are not so much supportive and not anyone from them is from the medical field.Their is two lecturers who are not available from last month and some of us who are coming to teach us are not open with students regarding subjects.
I would like to opt for Physical education course as one of my friend who is studying in this told me that there are plethora of physical activities are included in their daily routine and there is one period of one hour for only to do sports and workout and this course faculties are also supportive with the students and teach them whenever they need any help as most of faculties are in this course were in sports before joining college.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Johnny
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... the batch of 2019-2022 in your college.I am writing this letter to request you t...
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...u to change my this course and allot me a other course. I have chosen the psyc...
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...s and behavioral study and it is full of theoretical. The course have 6 exams in ...
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...one from them is from the medical field.Their is two lecturers who are not available ...
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...one from them is from the medical field.Their is two lecturers who are not available ...
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...are coming to teach us are not open with students regarding subjects. I would ...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the faculties') or simply say ''most faculties''.
Suggestion: most of the faculties; most faculties
...ach them whenever they need any help as most of faculties are in this course were in sports befor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.48453608247 254% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4674796748 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4472793907 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528455284553 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 347.4 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 16.3608247423 214% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.48974068 44.8134815571 311% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.0 76.5299724578 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 35.1428571429 16.8248392259 209% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199421493179 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920979417751 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552036341913 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108033811911 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604822096527 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 8.37731958763 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 7.45979381443 196% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.24 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 8.54432989691 187% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.