You have recently attended a job interview which went well, but you are still waiting for the decision. Write a letter to HR manager of the company and say
– Give details of the job.
– Why do you think the interview went well?
– Why do you need to know the result?
Dear mrs. Smith,
My name is Victoria Evans. Last week I attended an interview for an accountant position in your company. I am writing to enquire about the decision regarding my candidacy.
According to the vacancy you are looking for a professional with a relevant degree and at least one year of working experience. I have a bachelor degree in Economics and I have worked as an accountant for the last three years. Moreover, I have an experience in calculating payroll for employees ,which is the main duty for this position.
During the meeting in the company’s office I was introduced to the chief accountant Julia Johnson. She was delighted to learn about my skills and experience and that I am able to start the work immediately as the former employer already have left.
I am interested in acquiring the job in your company very much.However , It’s been already a week since the interview, but I did not receive any response. I’d appreciate if you could inform me about the outcome so I would know if I should keep looking for work in other companies.
I look forward at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Victoria Evans.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nce in calculating payroll for employees ,which is the main duty for this position...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...iring the job in your company very much.However , It's been already a week since t...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he job in your company very much.However , It's been already a week since the...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94387755102 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96237148661 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627551020408 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8652515721 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.75 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146212575016 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427128404661 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389150377221 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698808359365 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529506288321 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.