You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter, » explain why you were at the restaurant » describe the problems » write about the action you want the manager to take
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Divya Teja ,writing to raise my concern about the meal we had at your restaurant last Sunday. I and my husband visited your restaurent to celebrate our 5th marriage anniversary on 10th September but the meal quality was upsetting and it ruined our celebration spirit.I am hoping that you would take actions to improve your food quality and maintain your reputation.
Let me explain my concern in more detail.I am regular customer of your Rasa Place Restaurant because you guys maintain hygiene, ambience ,staff behavior and above all good food quality.But last time it was a big disappointment. I had table booked well in advance but it was allocated to someone else, which is not acceptable as it hurts customers' faith in your service.Moreover, the meal was less than average. The first course of food was tasteless and salty. We mentioned that the chicken was undercooked but no comment or apology was made at the time.On top of that, our sandwiches were served cold! Though we complained about our food to the waitress, she did not mind us and instead told us to complain to the manager.
I had a high expectation from your restaurant but got equally frustrated. I would really appreciate if you could take proper action about this inconvenience that we had due to the food we ate at your restaurant.Please offer the best possible meals, dining experience and efficient waiters to your customers.
I look forward to your immediate response regarding this.
Yours faithfully,
Divya
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...havior and above all good food quality.But last time it was a big disappointment. ...
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...ing this. Yours faithfully, Divya
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, moreover, really, regarding, so, well, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 937.175257732 139% => OK
No of words: 253.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15019762846 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16351744853 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 127.690721649 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.878127413 44.8134815571 268% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.777777778 76.5299724578 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1111111111 16.8248392259 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 4.34317383033 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226582433729 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893418660676 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490073626675 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132482208239 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045245429076 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 8.37731958763 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 70.7449484536 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 8.62886597938 330% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.