You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager.
In your letter:
1-Describe the training course you want to do
2-Explain what the company could do to help you
3-Say how will the course be useful for your job.
Dear Mr. Fady,
I am writing to express my interest in the announced training course that advertised through the CEO magazine in June.
Although I have been an employee in our multinational company over 3 years, I have never enrolled in any training course. The course is a PMP on next week which related to the core of my job description, and it educates the difference between all contract types. I started the same course last year, but I could not complete due to the previous workload.
The company has a list of numerous courses; however, that specific course is not included. I would request if the company could allow me one week off to catch the next cohort. Meanwhile, I will arrange with one of my colleagues who can address all my commitments with clients during my leave.
I have read the contents carefully, and it will improve my skills of using the Project Management new programs. In addition to enabling me to write strong contractual letters in replying to any letter from our clients. The course is also extremely beneficial to determine the good terms and rules of any contract.
I look forward to receiving your formal approval on my leave.
Yours faithfully,
Ayoub
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87378640777 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71085973196 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640776699029 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5122926048 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6666666667 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207659105397 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717994545191 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320082168265 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101431573354 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033734511815 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.