You work in an office and have recently been experiencing a health problem. You think that the problem started because of the working conditions in the office. Write a letter to your manager.
In your letter:
describe the health problem
explain why you think it was caused by conditions in the office
suggest what the manager should do to improve the working conditions in the office
Dear Mr. Jack,
I am writing to inform you about a serious health issue, which I am currently struggling with due to the working conditions at the workplace, and I would like to suggest ideas to improve the situation.
With regard to the health problem, I have been suffering from severe back pain for the last 15 days. In fact, this is extremely painful that I could not sit on my office chair and have consulted a doctor, who suggested taking two weeks rest and has prescribed some pain relief medicines to me.
As for the reason why it is due to the working conditions in the office, I could only assume it was the result of newly introduced office chair. Because this chair is not designed considering long working hours and quite uncomfortable from the body posture point of view.
Because all these chairs have health-related concerns, may I suggest you please contact the facility team and recommend that every employee should be allocated an ergonomic chair to work comfortably at the workplace.
I sincerely hope that my suggestion would be helpful to make our working conditions more comfortable for everyone.
Yours sincerely,
Tom
Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, as for, as to, in fact, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97948717949 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72318798364 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661538461538 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.6019169036 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.375 76.5299724578 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.375 16.8248392259 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 4.34317383033 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248697308157 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968176409221 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392150365874 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114069112387 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314839105083 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.