Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes suggested that lack of humans prefer to browse the broadcasts on the network than by the traditional method. I strongly agree that magazines will be continued the most significant source of journals and that people are likely to use the web version of newspapers. Firstly, this essay will discuss the possible benefits of web version of journals, and secondly, it will analyze the comfortable usage web sites of newspapers.
The primary reason why online news are better than standard method is that online version is available every hour. This is because unusual type of information is a golden opportunity for people to take this information immediately, which helps them in the long run. As a result lack of humans who prefer to use the unregularly method are faster recognize the newest information than the societies, who use the typical method of newspapers. A prime example is England, where people say that they key to success is that they get the information as soon as possible.
Another point to consider is that the web version is relaxed in using. The reason for this is that lack of companies of magazines are likely to create the contented design for the environment as beauty as possible. As a consequence public is likely to use the exactly web site with needed information. For instance, BBC is a tv channel, which have the own web site with news, was took the first place in yearly tournament that names “The best web-site”.
In conclusion, I am firmly convinced that the online versions are easily to check during the day and that it is luxury to use them in preferred design. This is due to the fact that many web-sites are available every 24 hour per day and lack of organizations tries to create the useful version of magazines.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... the environment as beauty as possible. As a consequence public is likely to use t...
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...BBC is a tv channel, which have the own web site with news, was took the first place in ...
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Suggestion: taken
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85901639344 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77168467869 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508196721311 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4919505616 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0671225646809 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.025421581941 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394134628407 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0419369594118 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374918214782 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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