Cases of bullying in school are increasing and worsening.
What do you think are the causes of this?
How can we tackle this issue?
The harassment issues of students in the education sector is the one of the most prominent ones that is occurring over and over every day. It causes effects quite severely to pupils for both their mental and physical health. While this is a serious problem, it can be solved by taking some treatment.
The main reason for that is due to students being unsatisfied with each other.
In the schooling term, the exchange of student members takes place a lot, that ‘s why it may raise conflicts with each other. For instance, it simply occurs when a student makes a controversy with another classmate because she or he makes a fuss with that one. This might lead to a violence between them, affecting both their physical and mental problems.
However, there are solutions to this problem. One of the ways to deal with bullying is that the school needs to impose strict punishments to prevent harassment by patterns. The second one related to mental perspective is to occasionally hold some courses to impart or educate students about bullying behaviors to enhance individuals’ awareness about this problem. We should use both methods including internal and external ways to get away from conflicts and help students perceive drawbacks from that. In fact, some recent surveys in some schools, with treatments coming from school resistance and expanding their own perception in inner children make the harassment alleviate remarkably.
To sum up, it is clear that the harassment in school is a noticeable issue, generating problems which are harmful for student’s holistic means. Nonetheless, the issue can be resolved by educating related lessons and enforcing regulations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, nonetheless, second, so, while, for instance, in fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18014705882 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73955777362 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595588235294 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7967210567 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.642857143 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134115219998 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523006713184 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398809010388 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0688328693991 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409748595779 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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