Employers should give their staff at least a 4-week holiday a year to make employees better at their jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
No matter how enthusiastic toward work, people need enough time to rest and do what they like to make life meaningful and colorful. Some people argue that it is necessary for giving staffs a long time holiday, mostly 4 weeks, to make them work better. I believe it is more appropriate to let workers themselves to decide the time and duration of the holiday. And this essay will discuss this question in two aspects.
On the one hand, some bosses refuse to give their employees enough holiday since they believe their workers will feel unfamiliar after a long time entertainment when returning to workplace. Staffs always feel uncomfortable when they just get use to a life with more leisure time but then have to return to work. And they often need a not short length of time to recover and adjust to the best condition. Thus many employers prefer to provide short time rest to staffs and let them learn knowledge or relax.
On the other hand, however, many employers complain about their short time rest since they can’t feel relax and having a real life. Some workers like a lone time holiday so they can have a long time trip with families. A short time rest can’t help some staffs escape from strain and they still feel exhausted when they back to work. In a long-term they will have negative attitude to work and thus have lower efficiency.
So it is necessary to let worker itself to choose the length and time of the holiday. Overall, people are different, some may adjust easily in a short time rest while some may not. At least, it is a personal matter and should be left to workers’ own discretion.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, then, thus, while, at least, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69444444444 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42168022415 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520833333333 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8459749752 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136710568179 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514177437251 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519043447786 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917346917558 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292744585449 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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