Films were produced by big companies in the past but today people are able to make a film Do you think this trend is positive or negative

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Films were produced by big companies in the past, but today people are able to make a film.
Do you think this trend is positive or negative?

It is clear that in former times movies were created by huge enterprises, and in modern times individuals are capable to produce them. This essay will support the idea that as more people are creating films, more content is being generated, despite the fact of obtaining a less quality movie.

To begin with, the fact that nowadays people are able to produce their own movies, generates more content. That is to say that a plethora of different types of movies are being released. As a result, the audience is much higher than before. For example, in the past nearly all the films were created by Hollywood, this resulted in less diversity of movies since the managers had only one line of thoughts.

On the other hand, it is true that the quality of the recording devices of people cannot outperform the overwhelming quality that big companies movies possesses. As a consequence, this lead to a lack of special effects on many films. Therefore, it is argued that people are not encouraged to watch this type of films. However, as far as I am concerned, in modern times, the new computer softwares can modify certain scenes and generate gorgeous visual effects, hence, creating films by people is a positive development overall. To illustrate this, it is believed that the last Netflix series released was created by only one person with a smartphone and a laptop.

To conclude, although the quality of the movies generated by people is flowed/less compared to the ones of big enterprises, the fact of widening the spectrum of the content, generates a positive development overall.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, therefore, for example, as a result, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand, that is to say

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93656716418 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68901992098 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544776119403 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9451638747 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.25 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20333857178 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657498222276 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415410052909 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117098447061 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390924830089 0.056905535591 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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