The government should ban smoking in all public places, even though this would restrict some other people's freedoms.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer.
The issue of restricting smokers has been acute since the last century, when people added their lives of tobacco use.
Besides that, an opinion that the authorities are obliged to cease the distribution of tobacco in places where large crowds of people visit. I competently agree to the above mentioned point of view due to the reason marked.
Nowadays, a significant part of the population prefers to breathe pure oxygen without harm to their health. A plethora of people tend to avoid tobacco smoke as the latter contains concentrated toxic substances that are harmful to the body. Individuals prefer to surround themselves with chemicals -free air and require a place where it is possible. For example, according to the magazine “The voice of Ussuriysk” 35 percent of visitors to trade centers tired of the constant presence of smokers next to them and require extensions. Thus, officials should take care of its citizens and their health by creating specialized zones.
Moreover, I would like to add that limiting smoking in public places will help reduce the number of tobacco users. Due to the inability to constantly inhale smoke where they want smokers will think about changing their lifestyle. Creating barriers for tobacco smokers will encourage them to lead a healthy way of health. For instance, my friends hate the smell of cigarettes and ask me to smoke in designated areas but I often face the problem that it is impossible to find such places. Hence, the majority of people will think about their body and give up this bad habit.
To conclude, the government is obliged to take measures to combat smoking in public in favor of the health of citizens. This will lead to positive dynamics if smokers terminate spoiling their health, and this in turn will lead to an overall increase in body conditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99344262295 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60864129502 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593442622951 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7329466331 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.533333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162453258213 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527232227422 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317346400459 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843343338232 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250094665376 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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