Happiness is considered very important in life.Why is it difficult to define?What factors are important in achieving happiness?

Essay topics:

Happiness is considered very important in life.
Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?

Human pursue some roles to find happiness since the down of time. Throughout history , that is controversial issue that what is really happiness. It is agreed that each person enthusiasm are different and every one factors for happiness are not identical with each others.
This argument will be proven by looking how it is difficult to describe who is happy in own life because some people believe that happiness is having lovely relationship, other think having wealth or having some other materials and etc.
In addition to this , it is obvious that some factors such as good health , living in a peaceful environment result to happiness too. But this does not mean that people without these condition cannot be happy.
Finally, it has been proven that having clear perspective to life is very essential to feel happy and also changing our glass to life can pave the way of living. While happiness is having good family, good health, having lovely relationship and help or make happy others and what is not having problem in work ,in marriage and not annoyed others.
In conclusion, it is obvious from this that defining happiness is very difficult because it is just a word. Happiness is having satisfaction feeling in life and these are just partial factors of happiness.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, really, so, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95348837209 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57313282615 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562790697674 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.357959461 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280185092533 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117259438881 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061750770884 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164278067213 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682432242693 0.056905535591 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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