It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Many people believes that with the advent of new technologies the traditional culture and values begin to decline, and it is inevitable that in the near future we will lost our traditional cultures as the technology develops. I do not agree with the idea and this essay will discuss that technology had only reduced the human effort without damaging traditional cultures.
Firstly, development in communication technology has played a vital role in the professional and personal life of people. With the advent of social platforms such as Facebook and Twitter some radical changes have been observed in the the daily life of people. Now days people almost post everything they do in their daily routine on these social platforms. This also includes the photographs taken by the family members in religious rituals. These trends are becoming so popular these days that people who have never followed the principles of their traditional culture have started following the entire procedure rigorously just to post photos and videos an these social platforms. For example garba festival in India is one of the oldest tradition. In this festival people performs traditional dance to impress goddesses Durga. With the arrival of dominant western culture people started wearing western clothes and started going to clubs for dancing and enjoyment purpose. Due to this the traditional culture has lost some of its values especially within the youth. But due to the recent changes in the technology specially in the field of internet people started posting pics of garba dance, which eventually attracted the entire youth towards it.
Furthermore, technology has in way helped in all sectors to save traditional cultures and values.In India more than half of the population relay on agriculture, and many traditional festivals are attached closely to agriculture fields such a basakhi.One of the festival which is celebrated widely in Punjab. Due to heavy manual work involved in farming new generation in India was avoiding farming, and due to this India will also loose its many cultural traditions. But due inventions of big and heavy machines in agriculture sector have reduced lot of human effort. So now young people are more diverted towards agriculture sectors.
In conclusion, both technology and traditional cultures can grow simultaneously. Moreover technology is not only preserving our cultural traditions but it is also helping it in flourishing.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2079.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35824742268 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8426362927 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525773195876 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 663.3 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.8827051848 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35062798433 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112755178438 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114248142594 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270403040461 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138098712842 0.056905535591 243% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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