In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Nowadays, some individuals think that people are rarely reading newspapers, or following the news on television, especially young people. There are several of this reason, but measures can be taken to tackle the problem.
The major causes of this problem are the most newspaper, and program on television is designed by the adult or older people, and are not presented a format for teenage, so they have not interesting to it. This is because, the languages are too difficult, and the style or content is usually quite serious. Furthermore, the development of technology such as computer and smartphone which is fascinating to young people who can play computer 24 hours than read a newspaper at 15 minutes. Finally, the format of newspapers or programs on TV are unfashionable and appealing to teenage.
One solution is that editor should update some news which interesting reader such as they can add some advertisements in the first page or hot information, while the computer cannot upload. Moreover, the government should build pupil newspaper which is free. In Canada, for example, pupil newspaper is located each restaurant or park in a center city, so young people can read the newspaper, while they are eating breakfast. Another way to confront this problem that the government should call investee who improve, and develop some program on TV such as in United state they cover both newspaper and program, and BBC news which is successful of them because over 1 million younger are following this per day.
Indeed, the number of young people read the newspaper, and follow the news on TV decrease per day, the government and some individual should protect some culture of people if they do not want newspapers to disappear instead of technology devices will occupy people in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07094594595 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75976708651 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547297297297 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.4766534229 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.454545455 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246386610686 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948172546984 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531328116162 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167628053419 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271493867428 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.