Many sports players advertised in sports products.Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Advertisement plays a huge role for promotions and marketing of consumer products. Nowadays, people tend to choose the product based on how it's marketed. Products involving promotion by celebrities like athletes tend to increase the revenue for producers. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of advertisements by celebrities.
One of the major advantages of choosing athletes for product advertisements is because of huge number of fans and followers. This would promote the sales of product and increase brand value. Athletes are also given the position of brand ambassador. In a recent survey it is stated that 80% of products have increased sales because of promotions by sports persons. For example, there has been an increased sales product named "BOOST" since it has been advertised by Virat Kholi and also other companies like addidas, reebok etc have also increased sales in the similar manner.
On the other hand, when considering the disadvantages, companies tend to use these chances to increase profit and compromise the quality of products. There are certain reports that in edible products many different chemicals and steroids have been used. For example, A sports drink which was promoted saying that it would raise energy levels had hospitalised many consumers and also endangered their lives. Certain products tend to show fake reports about their product.
This essay has discussed the advantages and disadvantages of advertisements on products by celebrities. Despite minor disadvantage, promoting a product using sports person tend to have more advantages and also has a better reach in expansion of business. Producers should act in an ethical and nominal manner to consumers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...certain reports that in edible products many different chemicals and steroids have been used. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51310861423 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04675144783 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539325842697 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6636097131 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151046106879 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573536356827 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058264878798 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108158755684 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342927424114 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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