Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is argued that whether most people have not cared about the true meaning of festivals or not. Instead, they only focus on their enjoyment on these special occasions. Personally, I strongly think even though festivals like this are all about enjoyable moments to some people, the reasons for these are still held rigidly in their deep heart.
On the one hand, it is true that traditional or religious festivals act as a means of relaxation and releasing stress. In fact, we are living in a fast-paced world where people are usually snowed with their deadlines and heavy workload. Therefore, they try to take advantage of these special occasions as much as they can to recover from all stresses and pressure from work. They only pay their attention to fulfill their dreams which they cannot do during the rest of a year. For example, on Tet or Lunar New Year, Vietnamese people usually put their work aside and enjoy their moments with their beloved people like family members or lovers. This occasion provides people with a golden opportunity to have a family reunion and share all their achievements of the last year to strengthen their family relationship.
On the other hand, I still hold a firm belief that people still know the true meaning of festivals very well besides the purpose of enjoyment. First, people in some countries which are rich in cultures and customs such as Vietnam still uphold traditions very rigidly and tend to pass these long-lasting cultures to younger generations through the stories and historical lessons they tell on a daily basis. So, the reasons for such festivals are very well-known to the general public. Second, some regions still assist their followers with the basic knowledge of their background. Thus, these religious occasions are regarded as a chance to show their respect to their religions and pray for the goods.
In conclusion, it seems to me while people somehow concentrate on their pleasure on these festivals, they still keep in mind the true meaning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, second, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99109792285 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53060931031 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543026706231 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5283664971 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.133333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.73333333333 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191270463147 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755863891557 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494322378126 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124473284051 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423013352681 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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