Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Undeniably, there are influxes of people from all walks of life in many urban areas globally. Analysing statutory enactments by policy makers with respect to culture, education as employment as measures that will result in harmonious coöperation among residents.
To begin with, state managers, who have the legal authority to make laws, must make sure that the traditions and customs of others are respected by providing legal guidance. To further explain, in as much as host nations consider it right for their customs to be valued by outsiders, it is equally significant that the culture of immigrants is upheld as long as it does not infringe upon the fundamental laws of the said state. In U.S.A, a law recently passed acknowledges other non-native customs; so, residents, native and migrants alike live in peace.
In addition, a similar legal provision should be directed at the labour industry. Thus, foreigners can be given equal access to employment, as well as their deserved conditions of service. Regrettably, many expatriates are over exploited by their employers in the Middle East due to the absence of such statutory provision. Accordingly, sensitive employment sectors, such as top security and financial portfolios must be reserved for the native citizens to avert any form of security and financial breaches. The civil unrest in South Africa due to these reasons is a clear example.
Finally, In order for outsiders to fit properly and be accepted by the local residents, they need to be educated on the rules of engagement with respect to cultural values and traditions of the host country. If governments make education free for foreigners, they will adjust to the local customs with ease, especially in relation to language acquisition. As a result, they will be no marked differences between locals and outsiders in their day-to-day activities and peaceful interactions.
In conclusion, the rate at which cities are growing cosmopolitan appear unprecedented; nonetheless, state managers can make clear rules backed by legislation with respect to cultural tolerance, job acquisition and education to make sure a peaceful co-existence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, finally, if, nonetheless, so, thus, well, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38235294118 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02721793779 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597058823529 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7045691569 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.714285714 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129642328278 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435920871454 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437908284644 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715836232355 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378707553918 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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