In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In this era, it is moot point of discussion - where, administration ought to spend cash, that would bring a lot of benefits for locals. some populace ponder that, it is essential to pay out funds upon constructing Railways lines for very fast trains . However, others reckon that, they should lay out on upgrading exciting public transport.
On one hand, technology has been booming exponentially, account of that ,utilisation of advanced gadgets are ballooned. Money ought to disburse upon railway, thus there are multitude of benefits : it is easy to arrive the destination; railways have driven many factors to develope countries; it assists for mitigating issue of adulteration and contributed to readuce traffic on roads .when authorities should squander cash upon evolution of railways. The epitome of this is ,Canada ,where government has started to improve means of transport such as bullet train and high speed railway which will create thousand of jobs, increasing economy and less use of fossil fuels.
On the other hands nowadays the proportions of fossil fuels have been decreasing ,although people are used to with road transports, so administration ought to sums of cash expand upon improve means of transport like electrical cars and some other vehicles which are worked by solar system. Moreover, spending money upon improving infrastructure of roads ,also price of plane ticket's would be cheaper because all categorie's people can enjoy the travelling. For an example, India, where government has been emphasizing upon reducing air pollution because of that, they are giving a refund those who are using improved means of transport like that vehicles which help to decrease air adulteration.
In my opinion, Government have to focus upon evolution of Railways because there are plethora of benefits for local as well as authorities.
To conclude ,much money will be spend on Railways by administration because, it helps to solve Global problems ,but there are some other exciting transport where governments must focus on it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, thus, well, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35294117647 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87354556337 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606811145511 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.7672973989 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.181818182 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3636363636 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249104275176 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954014283077 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561184001919 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137597111646 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587071263888 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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