One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages
In many countries, the population is aging consistently, and this derives significantly from the healthcare system. However, it might present with challenges as well as opportunities for society. However, It seems to me that the drawbacks of an aging society are dominant, and I will explain why in this essay.
Firstly, the gravest problem caused by longevity rises in the demand for recipients of healthcare. For example, beds and medical treatment is keeping the elderly alive in hospitals, but at what cost to others?. In addition, young adults will increasingly have to look after their elderly relatives. A second negative factor is an insufficiency of wealth in government. By this we mean that the state might receive less money in taxes in relation to the size of the population, while more people of retirement age would be eligible to receive a pensive. This leads us on to the final that is a shrinking workforce. An aging society will mean a greater tax burden for working adults, and can eventually stifle economic growth. They point to evidence from countries such as Japan where this appears to be the case and comforting these disadvantages.
I accept those old people also offer other benefits to families and those in communities. Examples can be seen that their children might receive an adequate inheritance from their parents who are in retirement age. In terms of society, older employees have a wealth of experiences and specialized knowledge they have obtained throughout their working lives. This means that they support to ensure the consistency of staff training of an organization. Despite these, it seems that for increasing longevity, these benefits are outweighed by issues which can affect negatively to society.
To conclude, the problems of health treatment and tax burden combine together to make life expectancy a challenging, especially when the elderly cannot be independent. This is not to say that all retired people suffer in this way, but it appears to be the case very frequently
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...rement age would be eligible to receive a pensive. This leads us on to the final that is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, so, well, while, for example, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17272727273 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92942545851 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578787878788 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8145087681 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0887021828779 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0273873653648 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268135998784 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0602205255313 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290484572825 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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