ople believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
A level of satisfactory of our lives has been controversial along with our thinking. While some people believe that it is important to accept our reality wether it good or bad, I think that I would reject to deal with bad situations and insist of acquisition of good opportunities.
Looking for those who are claiming to make peace with reality even if it is awful. They overestimates the risk that could be emerged in case of change. The frustration of losing what they are is dominant on their behavior, so they prefer just to keep it. Their assumption is that if you had a bad job and you tried to get rid of it, probably you would lose your earning, because you cannot guarantee to have a better one. Consequently, if you want to take any further steps in your career, you should make a lot of calculations in fear of losing every thing. Ending this up with keeping in your position as any step will certainly come up with its risks.
On the other hand, improving your life is a great essence in order to meet yourself. No one could reach to his goals unless he tried extremely hard. No one can win in a battle without wounds. Correspondingly, many celebrities and respected figures have addressed that in many articles and interviews that how hard their lives were, and how obstacles they had to face in order to be tremendously popular. If they had taken steps back and just had accepted their lives then, they would not have gained all of these impressive flattery. Thus, the partial dissatisfaction on your life comes along with the consistency of achieving yourself, which are the key points for success, are very critical to take into consideration.
Finally, I believe that everyone has to select his targets and to try very hard to make them possible is the only way to self-development; however, if there is a failure in any stages, this will be turned into lessons which will lead to a definite glory after while.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'overestimate'
Suggestion: overestimate
... with reality even if it is awful. They overestimates the risk that could be emerged in case ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, however, if, look, so, then, thus, while, as to, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66472303207 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75608448092 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577259475219 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3951565072 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.666666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.093116083 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0287456901871 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327301434065 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0526736444179 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117761716608 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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