People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
The first thing comes in our mind about colleges and universities; is the place to get the higher and skilled education. Everyone has a dream to get the highly paid and white-collar jobs, and to get the dream job without college certification is next to impossible. Now these days, colleges are the authority who certify the individual about their educational skills and personal behavior which is the fundamental criteria to get a job. Although, it is the matter of discussion " Do attending the colleges is really required to get the job and status?" I personally believe that attending the colleges and university is important to a person to build the intellectual and social skills. College education boosts our knowledge and skills. I will explain my opinion in below paragraphs to strengthen my views.
First, I would like to draw the attention towards the authority who validate a person is fit for the described job; this authority is nothing other than the universities. Nowadays, to get the job without a related degree or certification is very tough. This is the first and basic criteria required by any job description. First and foremost, reason to attend the university to get the perfect job. In addition, sometimes people joined the university to get the deep knowledge about technology which is helpful in their career growth or promotion. These days education system refined very well, so people join the universities to get the technical skills like computer and programming.
Secondly, Social etiquettes are also the important part to build a great nation and peaceful society. University education help to boost the social skills, in colleges mostly the well-mannered and educated people are around you, where you can learn the social etiquettes from these educated people. Moreover, for some persons, university education is the status symbol, so they use to attend the universities to maintain their social status. In some specialized courses, a college education is a basic requirement. For instance, to pursue the career in doctor the first requirement is to complete the graduation is science.
In my opinion, people attending the colleges to get the highly paid jobs, to maintain social status, to gain more knowledge and to pursue their career in the specialized field.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...their career growth or promotion. These days education system refined very well, so ...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...education is the status symbol, so they use to attend the universities to maintain ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1946.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21715817694 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93310820116 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477211796247 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1909267766 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.111111111 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7222222222 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05555555556 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266599201996 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866730200328 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685241022645 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176727235949 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212384290749 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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