People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
Many cities are facing a major threat due to increased population and lack of resources for living in everyday life. Governments should promote occupation of smaller towns thus would help in reducing the issues faced by balancing the Environment. This essay will discuss on problems faced by cities and also how urban areas can help to eradicate threats.
Nowadays, Increased population in cities has created several issues like Pollution, Water shortages etc. In cities, small families tend to buy cars for daily routine and is not used in an efficient manner thus wasting fuel and pollute the air. For Example, People living in huge apartments use high power motors to bring up groundwater to the surface because of which water distribution has also become an issue. Also, cities have increased use of automobiles has also created difficulty in travelling. Pollution is one of the major reasons for global warming. People should encourage public transports which would benefit better roads and less pollution.
On the other hand, regional towns can be developed to encourage relocation which would help to maintain a balance and reduce major problems. A recent survey has stated that developing urban areas has increased its revenues by 30 % and also reduces the burden on high taxpayers. Migrating to smaller towns can result in even distribution of manpower and also would encourage creating more service like jobs, hospitals etc. For example, implementing small hospitals with better medical facilities in urban areas could serve better for those who have to reach out to major towns.
On a whole, it is advisable that governments should encourage migration to smaller towns which could result in lesser issues faced by the people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient manner" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... cars for daily routine and is not used in an efficient manner thus wasting fuel and pollute the air. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24731182796 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6237825165 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569892473118 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7944864337 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.571428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219347306046 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751500600639 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667390745404 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151564433953 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800663886969 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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