People who have original ideas, or people who discover or invent things, are of greater value to society than people who are simply able to copy the ideas of others.
Do you agree or disagree?
Please write at least 250 words
Globally the issue of whether creative and inventive people are more significant has been a topic of discussion for many years. Some people believe that normal people who can simply imitate the ideas of others have no contribution to human beings. However, this essay will argue that both of those people are indispensable for the development of the whole society because those who have brilliant ideas are unable to achieve their goals without the efforts of ordinary people. (77)
To begin with, it is undeniable that the contributions made by innovative people have played a valuable role in evolutions. Regardless of different eras, noble ideas, inventions and discoveries have made a huge difference in solving the problems people encountered with. To be more specific, thanks to some remarkable scientists’ inventions, all the new strategies to generate energy in the Second Industrial Revolution highly improved people’s living standards. In this way, people could not respect those great brains too much. (80)
However, the value created by the people with original ideas cannot shadow the efforts made by normal people. Without the majority of people, inventors and scientists are not able to produce the final products that they design due to the limited number of them. For instance, industrialization could not be achieved even with the smartest minds in the Second Industrial Revolution if there were no workers in the industries following their advanced thoughts. Millions of people were involved in the revolution and changed society through copying. Thus, the power of people who can mimic great thoughts cannot be underestimated. (101)
In conclusion, this essay has argued that our society needs people with fresh ideas to guide others so that all the members can participate in the development and work together to make a change. The world would be a better place if we are grateful to those who are following the lead when we give great credits to innovationists. (58)
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 333, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...give great credits to innovationists. 58
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, thus, as to, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24375 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85262351836 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571875 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0910971264 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.857142857 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310525756793 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111108053987 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799235933474 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192453584801 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715732660493 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.