A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honor, kindness, and trust, no longer seem important.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, it seems that a person's value is determined by their social standing and financial goods. Values from the past, including integrity, generosity, and trust, don't appear to matter as much anymore. I partly agree with this statement, and I will explain the reasons in this essay.
On the one hand, in the day to day , the era of pop culture and materialism, as the public judge each individual relying on his or her wealth and social status . This is why most people have a trend of posting their properties on social media platforms and showing off their affluence in their daily conversations so that they may gain respect and admiration from their circle of relationships. Moreover, human beings tend to make close connections with those having benefits in order to get something out of the relationship including financial gain or business relationship.
On the other hand, moral qualities still play an essential role in most societies these days. Every government drives its residents to be good citizens and prevent society from negative effects ranging from impoverished conditions or social evils . In common cases, employers are still assessing their potential employees based on their hard-working attitude, positive behavior, and their integrity. People still form friendships, romances, business partnerships, and most other relationships based on old-fashioned criteria.
In conclusion, although people in recent days are evaluated on their wealth and social position, I do believe that old-fashioned values such as honor, respect, and trust cannot be eliminated from our daily lives. Therefore we must teach our young generation about these moral qualities, in order for them to survive and succeed in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, moreover, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41176470588 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93564246703 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654411764706 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6857472304 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.666666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167770257504 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617365367853 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595692121039 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110083521458 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604158445816 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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