By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is believed that killing murderers as a penalty is guilty due to the fact that this is considered to be an act of committing murder, so there is a suggestion that imprisoning murderers for life is a better choice. However, may people support the death penalty. Both opinions seem constructive and persuasive, but I would have a go for the former one. This essay will explain my reasons for disagreeing with the second opinion and standing on the side of the first one in two following paragraphs.
The group of people advocates the method of killing murderers has its own reasons. First of all, they believe it is a fair way to punish this dangerous crime. Nothing beats taking life to pay back to life when it comes to murdering people. Additionally, this way of punishing is an effective alarm to threat anyone who intend to commit crimes, resulting in the decreasing number of the rate of crimes in one certain nation. For example, being afraid of being killed after murdering people, many men in UK let the intention of committing crimes melt away.
On the other hand, imprisoning killers for life is considered to be the better method and there are two reasons for this claim. The first reason for this is that when a killer is put into jail and not allowed to get out for the rest of his life, he will have time to think about his action in the past. This method could cause psychological effect as a penalty on the killer. Furthermore, the action of committing murder could left a lasting regret on a person who is entrusted with the task of doing the penalty.
To conclude, although killing murders does have some impacts to some extent, I reckon that life in prison is much more better while we can cause psychological effect on the murder and nobody will be sorry about committing murder.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nish this dangerous crime. Nothing beats taking life to pay back to life when it ...
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Line 5, column 428, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'leave'
Suggestion: leave
..., the action of committing murder could left a lasting regret on a person who is ent...
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Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...t, I reckon that life in prison is much more better while we can cause psychological effect...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, while, for example, i reckon, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57035210631 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545171339564 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7549270917 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339423997302 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108342375096 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610390976767 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204617173765 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338958984513 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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