In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People nowadays have to face a new social problem which is the growing gap between the rich and the poor. Some people declare that it is deserve for them to earn much more money than normal people while others disagree and appeal to government that it should balance the salaries between people. I tend to agree with the latter one.
On the one hand, some people are truly deserve for high salary, especially for those who have important contribution toward human society. High salary always be given to capable workers, means a reward and also shows fairness. People who are not working hard should not be allowed to earn equal salary since it is unfair to others. So it obviously could promote the enthusiasm of working. Also, giving high salary to workers can not only avoid the brain drain, but also can attract capable people from other countries. This will bring lots of benefits to countries.
However, on the other hand, high salary also brings lots of down sides as well. It has shown that the extreme disparity between the rich and the poor is one of the reasons which causes social instability. Some people hate the rich and believe that they rob all the resources. Also, some of the rich bribe officials so that they can escape from punishment. In general, it is believe that government should increase tax toward the rich, so that more funding will be used for public service and therefore every people can benefit from that.
In conclusion, I believe if just a few people make too much money and the government does not adjust it, it will do more harm to the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: deserved
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be always
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73476702509 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23097478554 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4903984648 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373140932694 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112850438652 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868648641446 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220828290596 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630895789789 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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