Some people believe that the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views with your perception.
Education being the third eye of human beings set the foundation of a successful career for them. Presently, some masses ponder that the sole purpose of the varsity education is enable the degree holders to acquire prestigious jobs. However, others assert that it offers broader prospects for both the pupils and the communities as well. Here, I would discuss both the views with my own perception.
There are manifold reasons to support the former view. To begin with, academic qualifications are a compulsory requirement in most of the professions these days. For example, it is impossible for prospective candidates to become teachers, doctors or lawyers without having relevant degrees in hand. As a result, studying at universities definitely opens up numerous avenues for better employment opportunities. In addition, the job market is quite competitive and there are hundreds of applicants for a single vacancy. Hence, young people with optimum degrees can successfully secure lucrative jobs for themselves.
Now there are various points to shore up the latter view. Initially, pursuing higher education positively help the students to enhance their overall social skills. To justify, while studying, pupils try to get along with their fellow mates who are from different backgrounds in order to create a positive rapport. Hence, their maturity and confidence will grow and improve them as a person. Furthermore, graduates can make a considerable contribution to the society once they are done with their academics. To illustrate, many of them will work in multiple professional fields such as medicine, education, accounting and so on which are consequently indispensable for the overall prosperity of the nation.
From my notion, both aspects have their own significance. Undeniably, university degrees certainly play its role in assisting students to get jobs. However, I still believe there is a bigger picture of positive outcomes that come along when youngsters pursue professional qualifications. Such education is phenomenal to refine individual characters and upgrade the society as a whole.
To sum up, though people have distinct views about the role of university studies but the fact is that it is advantageous in a much lucrative way to both the masses and the community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, still, third, well, while, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4217877095 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03677022658 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617318435754 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.894590643 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4285714286 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0476190476 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38095238095 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31275784111 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718020660952 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486504071234 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155919826933 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532224589351 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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