Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wish. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
it is believed that children are allowed to make their own choices will lead to a society of individuals, others also believed that children need to decide all about matters that affect them. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my own opinion.
On the other hand, children should be allowed to make decisions about matters that affect them because they understand themself better than anyone, they know exactly what they want to do, what they want to wear...they know what is appropriate for them. In addition, if they make a decision themself, the independent ability will increase. they can solve problems faster without need help from anyone. they can choose and build life according to the way they want. For example, children should choose a job that they love instead of becoming a person who their parents want.
On the other hand, children, however, if they were free to choose base on their needs, maybe they just choose what is beneficial to them without regard for the people around them. Everyone has each different idea, it will lead to inconsistency, causing a messy society. For instance, on a dining table, this child wants to eat this dish and they don't care whether other children can eat it or not. Moreover, I feel making choices based on their own needs will make the child become selfish.
In conclusion, In some matters, we should let the child make the decision themself, but some matters should be considered by adults. that will help children always get things right.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86872586873 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35934822631 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552123552124 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.130031754 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210989780039 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812860131943 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100744040462 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158680652803 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103515074462 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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