Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is thought by some that exchanging information is inescapable in research, business and the academic world, while others are not positive about this view, because they thought some information is crucial, if it disclose, it may detrimental affect on those perspectives. From my point of view, I believe that today's world has been crossing the time of global communication. According to circumstances, authority should take accountability of whether information keep confidential or discloses to public.
On the one hand, data should available for people, because of global development. In other words, when any improvement or invention happened, it is matter of pride, if it is appealing all over the world. To exemplify, in medical science discover medicine of cancer prevention and they confide this. In the near future many people die without medicine, why this invention? For the shake of people scientist discover this and this should use it explicitly. In addition, by exchanging information students from different countries sought new things and contribute their knowledge or research findings to other, therefore, additional information added by others, which makes research more fruitful. For example, today's renowned writer or musicians write story or lyrics of song partially, after that publish in the social media and offer their followers to complete this which in turn explore hidden talent too. More importantly, without delivering information we can make progress by own, whatever the situation is business or literature. Needless to say, by exchanging views it become more durable and viable for the society.
On the other hand, some information create insurmountable pressure for county or individual, because of security. What I mean by this is that some dichotomy agreement between countries or political leaders impact on general public, hence, they may not understand the situation, as a result, take any drastic steps like, social protest, slogan or influence others to do something, which jeopardize the situation. Not only this, but also some public figure do not want to share their personal information like, marriage, separation, therefore, fan-followers going nuts about those information. Apart from this, some views about space travel, their expenses or their results sometimes scientist do not want to disclose, thus information is valuable for one country, whether it is used by other country for their own purpose. So that, reduce lopsidedness between countries, it is inevitable to keep some specific information secret.
I am convinced about that information can create or spoil social relation and communication. To my mind, those information disclose which improvise the situation. And partial or incomplete data should not be disclose publicly, which create misconception.
In conclusion, views are beneficial for society, similarly, hazardous too. Considering situation, it should available for people that they enjoy better service, utilize it their social improvement in a widespread way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'discloses'?
Suggestion: discloses
...ught some information is crucial, if it disclose, it may detrimental affect on those per...
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ial, if it disclose, it may detrimental affect on those perspectives. From my point of vi...
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Line 1, column 498, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...mation keep confidential or disclose to general public. On the one hand, data should availa...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s should use it explicitly. In addition, by exchanging information students from ...
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... progress by own, whatever the situation is business or literature. Needless to s...
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Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...Needless to say, by exchanging views it become more durable and viable for the society...
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ountries or political leaders impact on general public, hence, they may not understand the sit...
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Line 5, column 574, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'those informations'?
Suggestion: this information; those informations
...erefore, fan-followers going nuts about those information. Apart from this, some views about spac...
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...p some specific information secret. I am convinced about that information can ...
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Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'those informations'?
Suggestion: this information; those informations
...relation and communication. To my mind, those information disclose which improvise the situation....
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Message: Consider replacing "in a widespread way" with adverb for "widespread"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ce, utilize it their social improvement in a widespread way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, similarly, so, therefore, thus, while, apart from, for example, i mean, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 32.0 8.3376753507 384% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2593.0 1615.20841683 161% => OK
No of words: 462.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61255411255 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0339688711 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549783549784 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 810.0 506.74238477 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 2.10420841683 475% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 19.0 4.76152304609 399% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6858933995 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.863636364 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86363636364 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2546313811 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693695028436 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057710707815 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13792882815 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773240220771 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.