Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement?
It is considered that there are now more options to choose from compared to in the past. In my opinion, i fully agree with this opinion because the world is more developed.
People have abundant of selection due to the advancement of the world. First, technology has helped generate those alternatives. For example, in the olden days, in terms of communication, people could only have a face-to-face conversation, now, they can exchange conversations through numerous devices such as smart phones, tablets, as well as social media platform. Second, the growth of mankind has also played an integral part in this process. People are more imaginative and they are able to excogitate more and more ideas, products, services to choose from in their daily lives. Every day, there is a new type of food or item of clothes being introduced to the public which gives people the power of selection. So, they are no longer bound to just one option.
Beside that, the changes in society have also opened up a wide range of choices. In the past, people were more rigid, more principal, most of them were forced to follow a set pattern. However, they are now living in a world of freedom where people can determine their own identity, what they like without being pressured by others or the society. For example, now, instead of being limited to female or male, people have the option to be gay, lesbian or transgender. Moreover, in terms of occupation, people needless to follow in their family's tradition and can choose other jobs according to their liking. Therefore, people have more pleasure in having more choices.
In conclusion, I agree that there are now a variety of options for people. I believe that in the future, there will continue to be more alternatives for people as the world never stops changing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92182410423 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64685190283 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57003257329 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6753247839 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8823529412 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0588235294 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143060736571 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049827701471 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399028671941 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876996148072 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028502481482 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.