Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, we have freedom to choose and make decisions by ourselves. There are so many alternatives available for us that some people claim that it is such a burden to make a choice out of tremendous ways to choose. In my opinion, I agreed with the claim in some situations but, in some circumstances, we are unconsciously limited our options under uncontrollable factors. I will discuss both views and provide supporting examples in this essay.
On the one hand, people have many choices available to choose that sometimes can be troublesome. Thank to the advance trading and transportation network today, it is easy and affordable to buy goods, produced from the opposite side of world. For example, if you walk around a shopping mall in Thailand, you can easily find a fresh melon, grown in Japan, or an exquisite and precious jewelry, imported from Africa. In addition, even when you stay at your house, you can also access websites all over the world to look for the items that you want. This can, sometime, be a dilemma for many shoppers because there are various consideration and comparison, needed to be made, before individuals can choose to buy something.
On the contrary, although it seems that we got various choices, we are unconsciously limited out choices by uncontrollable external factors. Government policies impact our lifestyles implicitly and explicitly. For instance, in Thailand, we got poor public transportation system, which is one of the worst traffic congestion in the world. Even ones want to travel by public transportation services, such as, buses, trains, and taxis, it is impossible to access some areas due to the inefficient transportation network and, inevitably, people have to drive their private cars, worsening the current traffic problem. We, therefore, are forced by other factors not to make a decision which we prefer.
In summary, I believe that we have abundance alternatives in our lives, such as, eating, shopping, studying, and working. In some aspects, however, we are manipulated and influenced unconsciously by others and, most of the time, those hidden forces affect our quality of life. Therefore, we must be aware of these choices and balance them to suit our needs and lifestyles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in summary, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12568306011 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98888122393 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57650273224 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8127288801 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.352941176 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5294117647 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218399012929 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655129281742 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384571860896 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128707450065 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379575948656 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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