Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all subjects. Others believe that teenager should focus on that subject in which they are more interested. Discuss of both opinion.
Students should learn about all the necessary subjects in there school, college and university. However the teenager should also focus on what they are more interested in learning but although they are interested in a articular subject they should focus in overall subject for the better future
Teenager is the age period in which they think that they know everything. Its not there fault its due to their age but these people should be guided to learn and study about all the subjects that are taught in the institutions. They should learn about all the major subjects that are required to be study which helps to increase their brain and make them aware about various topics. For example they need to study health, social, mathematics, science for there basic knowledge about required things. which will help in future for there overall development.
On the other hand Teenager should also focus in the subjects which they are more interested on because it makes them work hard on that particular subjects. With the interested in a single subject he/she gives more time in those matter and it will make them perfect on that area which helps in his/her future. For example if a guy is more interested on sport in golf who knows with his hard work he can be next tiger woods but with the interested subject they should also get knowledge about the other related subject to become a successful person.
To sum up, I think teenager should focus more on their interested subjects and with it they should study their other subject in order to become a successful person in his/her life.
Comments
keep working hard
keep working hard
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, i think, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83516483516 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33707097381 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43956043956 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.6567391145 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342657595416 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16072447391 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11007415918 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252857189102 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479494864042 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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