Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both of these two views and give your own opinion.
It is considered by some people that for specific type of crime, there ought to be a respective punishments to executed,\ while there are others who thinks that it is better to hand down punishment with the analysis of criminal’s motive as well as the context of an individual crime. I believe that the punishment should be carefully consider for every cases before the court impose the sentence upon criminals.
The idea that there are fixed punishment for each type of crime does have its merits. The general idea is knowing the punishment beforehand would deter people with intention to commit crime. For example, if the authorities put capital punishment on homicide, the fear of death might stop people from murdering. Besides that, fixed punishments show that crime is not tolerated. The drawback of this option is that reality and theory is not always the same. It can be quite difficult to excise law on real scenario.
The alternative suggestion of take circumstances of crime and motive into account seems more likely to be effective in practice. Many judges consider that this idea would create a more humane system as well as fair trial. Firstly, in various case, the person who committed murder is mentally ill, therefore he or she cannot be grouped into the same category of others type of homicide. Secondly, there is a distinctive between killing for the purpose of defend and killing to revenge. As a resulted, taking circumstances into judging would efficiently remove false conviction in trial.
In conclusion, despite many benefits of fixed punishments, it seem to me that each crime should be judged taking both circumstances and motivation into account.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: knows
... does have its merits. The general idea is knowing the punishment beforehand would deter p...
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... does have its merits. The general idea is knowing the punishment beforehand would deter p...
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Suggestion: seems
... many benefits of fixed punishments, it seem to me that each crime should be judged ...
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Suggestion:
...cumstances and motivation into account.
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.229773462783 0.247107183377 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.155339805825 0.155533422707 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0873786407767 0.0946595960268 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0582524271845 0.0501214627716 116% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0323624595469 0.0437548338989 74% => OK
Prepositions: 0.15857605178 0.122226691241 130% => OK
Participles: 0.0388349514563 0.0403226058552 96% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.79961047592 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0258899676375 0.0326793684256 79% => OK
Particles: 0.00323624595469 0.00163938923432 197% => OK
Determiners: 0.0938511326861 0.0861772015684 109% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0291262135922 0.021408717616 136% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00647249190939 0.011925033212 54% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1692.0 1933.35771543 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 316.048096192 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.1083032491 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.382671480144 0.374742101984 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.252707581227 0.28420135186 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.191335740072 0.203846283523 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.14440433213 0.137316102897 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79961047592 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.037074148 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581227436823 0.56093040696 104% => OK
Word variations: 61.0600508203 60.7387585426 101% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.7857142857 20.7743622355 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1314510406 49.517814964 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.857142857 127.492653851 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7743622355 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.99599198397 150% => OK
Readability: 45.0564724085 49.1944974215 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.73684210526 1.69124875643 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.571905799846 0.332605444948 172% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0916507757783 0.102741220458 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0773008192039 0.0668466124924 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.523239468215 0.534860350844 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.196800843475 0.148594505496 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214281724824 0.134430193775 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107788223964 0.0742795772207 145% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.351216432519 0.324371583561 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.107316265387 0.0638462369009 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.384021086106 0.228012699653 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771387967198 0.058150111329 133% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.68436873747 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 5.90881763527 34% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 2.5751503006 311% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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