Some people prefer cold weather conditions, while others don’t. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The preference of weather varies from person to person in different nations. Some masses want to enjoy cold climate while the others prefer hot weather. In this essay, I shall shed light on both perspectives before reaching to my opinion.
To begin with, most mortals enjoy winters due to plethora of reasons such as to enjoy the delicious traditional food and relieve from the irritation of summers. The primary reason to prefer cold season is the availability of traditional food such as custard mustard leaves and corn breads,which is however not grown in sunny season. Additionally, the mortals want to enjoy the warmth of quilt by taking a deep sound sleep at night as the nights are longer as compared to the summers.
On the contrary, others show their interest in hotter days as they found it difficult to concentrate on their work in cold due to any reasons. Generally speaking, In winters there is fog which hinder the people to go their workplaces on time. Furthermore, they can do work as much as they can because of the longer days in hot season and contribute a lot for the progress and prosperity of their country. To illustrate, the indian people do work at late nights in summers to earn a lot for look after their children and for the development of the companies.
In conclusion, I believe that hotter days are better to improve economy as the days are longer and the civilization can focus on their work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75903614458 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65649217848 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546184738956 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0359909401 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.727272727 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131708699018 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574857775864 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785719311197 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844531238793 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102725283372 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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