Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Generally, there are two types of subjects in university. The one is a compulsory subject and the other one is a elective subject. The compulsory subject consists of major subject that student must take usually and the elective subject is that student would like to study normally.
Some people think that students have to study only classes that they'd like to take such as a not required subject. Because it can bring a increase of satisfaction of students in university. Then their ability of studying will rise up eventually. Furthermore, by taking plenty of subjects that they want to study, they will be able to get many opportunity to experience. For example, when I was a university student, there were a lot of interesting subjects such as a photography, art, acting, sports etc. Most of students will want to experience variety opportunities and it will make students more creative. For that reason, it can be clearly seen that university will produce plenty of creative students as time goes by.
On the other hand, there are people who think that students have to take only compulsory subjects such as a their major subject and science, mathematics, technology. Because if students study only subjects that can be helpful and effective in the future, students will be able to contribute to the improvement of country and competitiveness of country will also increase in the future consequently. However, it can be seen that there are some disadvantages in this opinion. For instance, if university disturb students to take their subject that they want to study, it will make students unsatisfied on their life of university. As a result, nobody will feel satisfied in university and it will bring the more big problems in the future.
In conclusion, it is fairly important that students have to study their subjects that will be quite useful and effective in order to progress their country in the future. However, i think that it is important that students have to take plenty of chances to experience for their creativity as well. Therefore, university always should take care of their life in school and provide a lot of subjects not only subjects that student would like to study, but also subjects that will be useful in the future such as science.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...compulsory subject and the other one is a elective subject. The compulsory subjec...
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Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put before the verb 'take'.
Suggestion: usually take
...ists of major subject that student must take usually and the elective subject is that studen...
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Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they'd
...tudents have to study only classes that theyd like to take such as a not required sub...
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Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to take such as a not required subject. Because it can bring a increase of satisfaction...
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Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... required subject. Because it can bring a increase of satisfaction of students in...
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Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun opportunity seems to be countable; consider using: 'many opportunities'.
Suggestion: many opportunities
...want to study, they will be able to get many opportunity to experience. For example, when I was ...
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Line 3, column 506, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the students') or simply say ''Most students''.
Suggestion: Most of the students; Most students
...a photography, art, acting, sports etc. Most of students will want to experience variety opportu...
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Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'their'?
Suggestion: a; their
...o take only compulsory subjects such as a their major subject and science, mathematics,...
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Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s their country in the future. However, i think that it is important that student...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96850393701 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81003460108 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.393700787402 0.561755894193 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5658932914 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.166666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373913701152 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133438600083 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722099974679 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258111936781 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664103033733 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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