Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motor-bike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motor-bike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is understandable that many induviduals regard restricting the youngest legal age for driving vehicles is the most effective way to enhance traffic safety, However, I strongly disagree with this opinion and the reasons behind it will be stated in upcoming paragraphs.
First and foremost, I believe that there are several factors contributing to road accidents other than drivers age. Firstly, obeying traffic laws is extremely crucial in order to maintain safety and avoid any car crash. A prime example for this is perhaps the fact that numerous drivers would cross the red light to save time and therefore, cars and motorbikes coming from different directions may not detect them and cause accidents. Thus, people who go against the traffic rules can bring dangers to themselves and others, regardless of their age. In addition, being able to control vehicle speed spontaneously in unpredictable situations also plays a vital role. This means that people need to practice their driving skills thoroughly before joining roads with high density.
On the other hand, there are many plausible disadvantages may occur if the minimum age for driving is increased. With people who have to commute to work or study at a very young age, this becomes a limitation. Even though we already have public transportation, a lot of people would find it inconvenient and time consuming compared to driving personal vehicles. Furthermore, implementing practices such as raising citizen's awareness on traffic laws or providing driver’s training courses may be an more efficient approach. This can reduce an immense amount of accidents caused by human errors and lack of driving skills.
In conclusion, few individuals may advocate that rising the minimum legal age for controlling a vehicle appear to be the best method in terms of traffic safety. However, in my view, other solutions will be more practical since drivers age is not the only factor which cause accidents and limiting the minimum age for driving can lead to an adverse effect to some people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
... implementing practices such as raising citizens awareness on traffic laws or providing ...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...viding driver’s training courses may be an more efficient approach. This can reduc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23333333333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78685916796 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630303030303 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0650345648 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.357142857 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197077605379 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636715526342 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403176815956 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118575060696 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260441638646 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.