Some people think job satisfaction is more important than job security. But others believe that people can not always enjoy their jobs and having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
Job is the most important to earn a living, the main source of peoples income. Millions of people are working to put food on the table and to provide better life for the family, while some thinks that chosen profession made them feel pleasurable and achievement. However, according to my perspective, having job satisfaction is essential for people who are aiming career growth, while having permanent job is most important for financially in need.
On the one hand, a lot of possible reasons why a person satisfied in their respective job. Firstly, employers are giving attractive compensation and additional benefits, thus, employee are motivated to work hard. Secondly, workers are giving opportunities for learning and improve their skills and help in professional growth, by means of giving recognition and appraisal. Lastly, having a good and harmonious relationship to employer and co-workers leads work become productive and enjoyable. My mother celebrated her 40th years in service; love, loyalty, and hard work to that company are undeniable and truly amazing and waiting to her retirement end this year.
On the other hand, having a continuous job is the most vital for people who are in need. Jobs are their bread and butter, that’s why its peoples financial security. Some people endure and sacrifice in job even they are not satisfied and happy at all. Difficult to search for a new job, luck of skills, low salary and not qualified for the position are the hindrance in transferring to other job. Furthermore, people work hard to provide family’s basic need like food, education and shelter.
In conclusion, having job is the major income of people; it will lead them to financial stability and work gratification. Whatever person’s occupation, fruit of hard work and self fulfillment matters. Strive to do best to achieve goal.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, thus, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87032905586 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586666666667 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3024360262 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6875 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333809349865 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112621829688 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959929636764 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198539172558 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116574597837 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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