Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The subject concerning genders has always been a controversial one. Males possess quite distinct traits from those of females. Consequently, many people hold the view that men seem to be more qualified for some particular occupations, and vice versa. From my point of view, although each gender indeed has its characteristics, any jobs are entirely appropriate for both men and women.
On the one hand, it is a universal truth that the qualities of men differ very much from those of women. Specifically, it has been scientifically proven that men are generally taller and heavier in weight compared to women; therefore, they possess more physical prowess. Thus, it is quite a common sight to see men doing jobs that require considerable physical strength. For instance, men have always outnumbered women in the construction industry. Meanwhile, women are bestowed with a much gentler nature along with higher emotional quotients. Hence, the majority of workers in careers that require a greater degree of tenderness and flexibility, such as kindergarten teachers, babysitters, and nurses, are female. Conclusively, it seems that people tend to set boundaries for job opportunities between men and women.
On the other hand, it would be wrong to assume that men are incapable of doing the so-called female jobs and the same for women. It is worth remembering that whether a person can do a particular job is determined by their knowledge, qualifications, and experience, not by their gender. In modern society, gender should not be seen as a hindrance to doing certain occupations. Women have proved themselves that they can do jobs that people once thought only suitable for men. To illustrate, in wartime Viet Nam, there were many bomb disposal squads which consisted of mostly women. Men, by contrast, are also involved in jobs that people once considered for women, such as chefs or obstetricians. These have blurred the boundaries for occupations between males and females.
In conclusion, even though each gender has its distinct qualities, there is no job that is suitable for one sex and inappropriate for the other. Instead, men and women have equal chances of doing whatever jobs they are interested in.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 187, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: heavier
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19832402235 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97565231937 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555865921788 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0394507039 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.05 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.460388798801 0.244688304435 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134868574098 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978851749945 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279686227303 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503105376723 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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