Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is often argued that the adolescent years are the most cheerful time of most of the people’s lives, while others think that maturity brings more joy, despite greater burden. Although the early years provide an opportunity to collect memories, this essay will show that adulthood enables economic independence, subsequently providing more happiness.
On the one hand, puberty years can be the most cheerful time of someone’s life because it provides an opportunity to collect memories. The simple reason for is that in the early stage of life, many teenagers live with their parents, which means not worrying about electricity bills or household expenditures, and this easiness gives them a chance to share joyful moments with their friends by travelling or going for a vacation. In Turkey, many high school students prefer to hang out with their classmates on weekends by going to the Starbucks to consolidate their friendships, which means collecting memories. Yet, this essay argues that people can feel more joy in the later stage of their lives with the help of economic independence.
On the other hand, having an economic independence means more happiness since the adulthood stage requires working life and a regular income. People can decide their own expenditures without asking for permission from their parents and this may boost their self-confidence, which means feeling more happiness. In many cultures, fathers are seen as a breadwinner, which gives financial support and takes care of other family members, and consequently, this role gives nearly all fathers a sense of joy. This essay, thus, believes that adulthood brings more joy since it enables people the economic independence.
In conclusion, while the adolescent years give a chance to collect joyful memories, the happiness of being economically independent in adult life outweighs the former one.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, may, so, thus, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41216216216 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87498213543 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550675675676 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.1639192229 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.636363636 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224965367536 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975935965735 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897661401285 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154226988532 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802907762488 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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