Some people think that young people should spend more of their free time at home with their families and spend less time entertaining themselves outside, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In today’s world, there is a public debate related to time spent for families. It is thought that young people should allocate more time for their families and less on entertainment outside the home. In this essay, an attempt will be made to investigate this phenomenon.
To begin with, it is thought that young people ought to allocate more time with families rather than entertainment outside the home. The most frequent factor contributing to this view is that time spent on families is much less than the time spent on other activities in this day and age. One example to demonstrate this view is that statistics in this field show that Americans enjoy just 37 minutes of “quality time” as a family each day during the week. As this example reveals, it is manifest that youngsters should spend more time for their families these days.
On the other hand, some people disagree with this statement. One explanation to support this statement is that young people find it difficult for them to express their feelings as well as their worries or difficulties, which they are facing up with, with the members of their families. As a result, they are likely to share these with people outside. For that reason, it is clear that they tend to spend time enlarging their friend circle to unburden themselves to their friends. In fact, a survey in this field has shown that nearly a quarter of American teenagers feel like they cannot confide in with their parents. Therefore, they allocate more time to develop their relationships instead of their families.
Given the aforementioned points, it may be concluded that youngsters should spend more time for their families due to the less amount of time spent on now. However, they also need time to foster their companionship to open their hearts to these when encountering dilemma in life. All in all, I'm am of the view that youngsters should spend time equally for families and entertainment outside because of undisputed benefits brought up above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, in fact, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9349112426 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61819442629 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479289940828 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8988636213 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.463778753725 0.244688304435 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179426091026 0.084324248473 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109896916008 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306096768883 0.151304729494 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220652511385 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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