Some say that people living in high-rise apartments are lonely and unhappy, while others say that it’s advantageous to stay in high-rise apartments. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, due to the urbanization many people are moving towards the cities and living in the skyscraper buildings rather than the single houses. It is believed by some people is that living in the skyward buildings have several advantages, however, others argue that residents who lives in the skyward apartments feel loneliness and unhappiness. In my opinion, I believe that living in the high-rise buildings have more positive impact then the negative ones.
One of the major advantages of that the residents of the skyscraper buildings is that it provides them different modern facilities. There are different amenities are available in the high-rise building apartments like gym, swimming pools, playgrounds, clubs etc. So, anyone who lives there can get this modern facilities conveniently. Besides this, the securities which is provided in high-rise buildings are high. Apartments are always patrol by security guards. In addition to this, the close circuit cameras also monitors the overall security of the buildings. For this reason, the residents are secure from any unwanted occurrences from the outsiders. Another important facility of the skyward apartments is that it is more robust form the natural calamities. The buildings are well architectured to face several earthquakes than the normal houses. Therefore, the residents are more safer than the normal brick houses.
On the other hand, people who are living in the skyscraper buildings also facing some difficulties. One of the negative effect on living in the apartments is that it makes them feel lonely. This is because most of the residents who lives in the apartments are not permanent members, they live there on rent, as a result, the relationship among the neighbors are vulnerable and not long lasting. Due to the lack of social interactions among neighbors make them unhappy.
To sum up, although living in the high-rise building apartments have some negative effects, I believe that the advantages of the skyscraper buildings outweigh its disadvantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 438, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...ise buildings have more positive impact then the negative ones. One of the major ...
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Line 3, column 883, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'safer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: safer
...al houses. Therefore, the residents are more safer than the normal brick houses. On the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40438871473 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89529278236 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489028213166 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6860643938 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7777777778 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7222222222 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219981665234 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732433464112 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679519158057 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157100981449 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337439259574 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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