Success may have become a relative term in this age of moral relativism. But in the good old days, success is an admission to heaven. In my opinion, achieving success means a clear path to heaven.
Faith in god and all god’s creation can bring true happiness. As people deviate from the true path, people declare success something different. Either be a womanizer, unfaithfully have a colorful and lustful private life to succumb to gluttony and burst like a balloon. People’s success become satisfying fetish desire and bodily pleasure. This is a way to hell and eternal failure.
To become successful, a man must not win 0.000001% of his life time. Submission to lucifer and demonic sins will make a man suffer for eternity, that is the definition of winning once, and loser forever. A moral’s life time is so short and the milestone of victory is a hallowed gravestone. When all sins are redeemed and heavenly light invites, a man’s journey on earth will end in great accomplishment.
Money wealth material enjoyment will only play opposite role. As Satan’s teaching, wealth accumulation is a proof of hard work on earth. But a filthy man can go to heaven when a camel passes a hole on a needle. The more hard working, the less family and church time a man have. The more enjoyment, the less atonement on a hard carpet. When enjoyment on Earth is so great, a man will forget the perpetual happiness of Eden, truly free from physical and chronical sufferings.
In god’s omniscient land we can all rest and enjoy the fruit of success. Until then, we must prepare on earth and ready for the Rapture.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...ul, a man must not win 0.000001% of his life time. Submission to lucifer and demonic sins...
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Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...once, and loser forever. A moral's life time is so short and the milestone of victor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87142857143 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80279561604 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596428571429 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4179862972 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.2 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85 7.06120827912 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136608089332 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440316198197 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064181850324 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848837393139 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645022997843 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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