Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the global era, most of children in the world are interested to be an athletes in various sports. One important aspect that had triggered of this reality is the plenty of salary amount that athlete could earn. The issue is whether athlete is the best occupation than another profession?. In my view, I justify that professional athlete tend to richest than another work is fair. I hold this view for some reasons which are set out below.
To begin with, I would like to argue that professional athlete could be a rich man faster dan another job as caused of money linkages among club, competition, sponsorship or product endorsement, as well as fans which funded a professional athlete. while an athlete success to bring their club into the winner in competition, they not only implicated to the increase of club interests, but also they escalate the number fans, as well as increase the number sell a product whose their endorsed. Due to these condition, they could earned a bunch bonus from club, sponsorship or product endorsement.
Referring to the Guardian, Mohammed Salah had expanded the number of his salary in Liverpool FC fourfold while his success brought his club into the winner in the championship league.
However, some people still believe that athlete profession is not un sustainable and eventual. Unfortunately, they there is little evidence to support this view.
Taking everything into consideration, I believe that professional athletes could earned money faster than another profession is fair. I hold this view because of club, competition, sponsorship or product endorsement, as well as fans which them were constructed athlete profession more valuable than another works.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the children') or simply say ''most children''.
Suggestion: most of the children; most children
In the global era, most of children in the world are interested to be an at...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...ns which funded a professional athlete. while an athlete success to bring their club ...
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'earn'
Suggestion: earn
...sed. Due to these condition, they could earned a bunch bonus from club, sponsorship or...
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'earn'
Suggestion: earn
...elieve that professional athletes could earned money faster than another profession is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, well, while, as well as, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20652173913 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87222419262 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536231884058 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3509643641 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.538461538 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138786280192 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595648252264 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361238235064 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082411642148 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036591979367 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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