Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary world, advertisement industry plays a great role in gaining profits. Companies attract people's attention to their products by different way. Although, it would be a suitable method to improve the quality of goods for survive in competition conditions, sometimes they make mendacious needs in society so people probably buy things which do not really need it.
We live in competition world. If you want to be successful, you must make all of your efforts. These conditions force companies to meet consumer demands. So the possibility of receiving better goods by consumer increase. Otherwise, they miss their customers. It means loss profits and benefits.
Companies usually do everything to defeat their rivals in market even these attempts lead to consumerism. Advertising is one of these efforts which includes widespread means like using celebrities, new technologies or ideas. Due to the huge attractions, people especially youngster would motivate to buy that product while it might not an important requirement. Following the latest products may not seem a vital issue especially in developing countries which people are able to afford this changes. But, in under developing countries, it could convert to be a disaster. In these countries, there is a vast difference between social classes (poor and rich) so these adverts could make pressure in weak families. Furthermore, this society convert to a consumer and backwards rather than thinking to progress.
In conclusion, a great plan should be applied on advertising. They would manage in correct ways to use them to optimum levels.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t ways to use them to optimum levels.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, really, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4246031746 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98816374634 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662698412698 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8675293308 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9444444444 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27777777778 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145564973122 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378982646818 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041492384783 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863568282157 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440353976697 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.56 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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