Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Different people generally have diverse outlook about life style. Some people desire to change during their life and other prefer to have a stable manner. Although both attitude is widespread and many people engage to them, it is better for us to have a more moderated life. So that we should attempt to not involve in a uniform bored living.
It is manner of some people, avoiding the change during their life. This condition probably will make a comfortable living which never have challenges. Every thing is happened schedule and rarely something may be occurred that is not it timeline. Although first this rout seem so occasionally, but routine event will be abroad eventually. It is important to try finding a condition which can enjoy more. In other word, rewarding of life when has meaning that we had experienced a hard situation.
In contrast, although a fluctuated life which every thing may been happened, seem so excited, it could erode away luck of living. We should never forget that probably we have just got a chance for living so it is so vital to use more useful of this opportunity. Altering could make a more attractive life if it have an organized principles. When the main factor of live has been managed, and unpredicted event would never disturb the chance of good living.
I think we should struggle to have a systematic and moderated living which could stand both anticipated and unanticipated events. Never a routine way couldn’t be attractive similarly a fluctuated way has also chuck up the chance of living, so that neither of them never can be a good for short time of the world. We have to get use to identifying a set of life principle and try according to that’s factors. Therefore no my life is never board and no we never go in stress for unwanted events.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 276, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r for us to have a more moderated life. So that we should attempt to not involve in a u...
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Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[4]
Message: Did you mean 'may be' or 'has been'?
Suggestion: may be; has been
...ugh a fluctuated life which every thing may been happened, seem so excited, it could ero...
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Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...could make a more attractive life if it have an organized principles. When the main ...
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Line 4, column 131, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Never' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
...h anticipated and unanticipated events. Never a routine way couldn't be attracti...
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Line 4, column 215, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'chucked'.
Suggestion: chucked
...ive similarly a fluctuated way has also chuck up the chance of living, so that neithe...
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Line 4, column 419, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...d try according to that's factors. Therefore no my life is never board and no we nev...
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Line 4, column 449, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'boarded'.
Suggestion: boarded
... factors. Therefore no my life is never board and no we never go in stress for unwant...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, similarly, so, therefore, i think, in contrast, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77635782748 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69217437705 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514376996805 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5686840483 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0555555556 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3888888889 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120759920978 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443752737762 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589317581185 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804981219484 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318833990676 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.