The best way to reduce youth crime is to educate their parents with parental skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Educating parents about constructive ways to raise children is being seen as a significant way of preventing young people from engaging in criminal activities. while parents have a major role in the upbringing and character building of a child, environment outside home to which he is exposed and his own self-discipline also have equally important bearing on his moral behavior and these issues have also got to be addressed.
To begin with, parents definitely have a major influence on the way in which their children behave with others. that is to say, if father reacts positively to what mother has said or done, the infant is more likely to learn from it and replicate while responding when faced with similar social situations. On the other hand, teenagers who are under an aggressive parentage and brought up in a family where conflicts are a commonplace, they might turn to violent ways in their adolescence. A study from Nepal, for example, suggests that more than 50% of criminal activities are carried out by people who grew up in unstable families. Therefore, teaching parents about the good practices of parentage can guide them to create positive environment at home and deter their teens from anti-social behavior.
However, there are other factors that can equally affect a child's psychology and demenaor. Of them all, the type of peer group of which the young children are a part at school or in the neighbourhood is often associated with the type of human being he will eventually become in the future. Moreover, it is the peer pressure which forces even an innocent and a well-groomed young boy or girl to indulge in unwholesome activities like smoking and taking drugs. these external environments are that the parents cannot control and where the young person is in charge himself. Hence, there could be educational programs designed at schools and colleges aimed at edifying children about the right conduct and for encouraging them to partake in healthy group activities. Moreover, every community should have children and youth clubs which should be tasked with the responsibility of building a creative society by taking on board children and youth for social welfare projects which could be preemptive and see off the occurence of any untoward incidents.
In conclusion, instructing parents with good techniques of parenting is useful for their children to learn good ways. However, educational centres and communities also have to be involved for children to become good citizens and keep them from offending.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2132.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 414.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14975845411 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81728676506 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536231884058 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.1626435259 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.133333333 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175588886962 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664933049002 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06682952979 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118801232462 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347972685224 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.