Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree?
Finding a way into the university is a difficult task, it is due to rising competition among youth for taking admission in best institutes. I totally disagree with the notion that universities are inaccessible for both wealthy and poor section of people as students from all backgrounds are securing seats in universities.
University education is considered to be best for securing good jobs with handsome package across the whole world. Therefore, rush for securing a place in the premier educational institutes is understandable and students irrespective to their family status are securing seats in them. For example, super 30 coaching centre for students who belong weaker section of society is sending students into the best engineering colleges in India.
Affluent families are also keen to send their wards to the best educational centre and they are providing the best coaching to their children for that. Moreover, they can afford the tuition fee for expensive courses like MBBS. In addition, if their wards fail to get admission in the best college or university, they send them to foreign universities. For instance, in India, it is a common practice among rich people to send their children abroad for education.
Nobody can stop a person with an aim in life even if one belongs to a below poverty family. It is true in this case also and there are plenty of examples to prove this fact. The Punjab university vice-chancellor belongs to a poor Dalit family yet he received his degree in distinction from the same university.
In conclusion, it is hard to say that youngsters from a particular group are finding an entry into universities as the facts are contradictory.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: IT_IS_JJ_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rise'?
Suggestion: rise
...rsity is a difficult task, it is due to rising competition among youth for taking admi...
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Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'centre' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centres'.
Suggestion: centres
...in them. For example, super 30 coaching centre for students who belong weaker section ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10431654676 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95442890816 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561151079137 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7946443333 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.153846154 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13379518239 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494029958797 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612123194426 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930677739044 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826179027348 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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